Taking Stock of Your Work

How well do you think you told the story?
I think I told the story well. In particular, it was a very small encounter I had with literacy, with every detail shared in my narrative. I think my readers could grasp my story pretty well.

What did you do especially well?
I think I used good adjectives which aided in good imagery for my readers. I think they could feel the journey I was taking with my poetry.

What could still be improved?
I'm sure there is a lot that I can improve. In particular, I know that I could work on my organization.

How did you go about coming up with ideas and generating text?
Literally, I put myself in the position I explained in my paper. I adventured to "my place" (like I always do) and imagined myself in this place and began my brainstorming.

How did you go about drafting your narrative?
I first, brainstormed in "my place," then I made an outline, then I did a rough draft.

How did other's responses influence your writing?
I was told to try and better organize my paragraphs and I attempted to do so best I could.

What would you do differently next time?
I would probably add more dialect.